Amy Aday

The Deal

What happened next?? I read this story but feel like i skipped a few pages, it’s almost like reading the beginning and middle of a book then finding the end’s been ripped out and there’s no other copies in the shop, he was cold towards her with his straight talking, she warmed to him quickly, i imagine either she fell for him and then turned away from him because he didn’t want her like that or he warmed to her much more than he thought he would and now they have  a ‘white picket fence’ lifestyle….either way can we please have a part two.

Story: 3 (i’m left wondering too much, i like cliffhangers not dead ends)

Characters: 5

Cover: 5

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